The Rewrite

The Words Never Come Out Right The First Time

HoHumDeeDum! - Chapter Seventeen
Relaxed
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Somewhere in a mysterious and magical place, there lives little singing, lizard-like creatures called the Do-Dum Tribe. Every Do-Dum has the ability to sing, but few special Do-Dums possess the magic of a unique sound. Do-Ti is one of the ordinary Do-Dums, whose desire to possess a unique sound, has led him to venture outside of the Mango Gardens. However, when Do-Ti tries to return, he discovers that the Great Tree, that has always been home to his people, has been taken over by a big black bird! Now Do-Ti and the remaining members of his tribe, must find away to beat this new enemy...

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HoHumDeeDum! - Chapter Sixteen
O-M-G!!!
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Somewhere in a mysterious and magical place, there lives little singing, lizard-like creatures called the Do-Dum Tribe. Every Do-Dum has the ability to sing, but few special Do-Dums possess the magic of a unique sound. Do-Ti is one of the ordinary Do-Dums, whose desire to possess a unique sound, has led him to venture outside of the Mango Gardens. However, when Do-Ti tries to return, he discovers that the Great Tree, that has always been home to his people, has been taken over by a big black bird! Now Do-Ti and the remaining members of his tribe, must find away to beat this new enemy...

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HoHumDeeDum! - Chapter Fifteen
^THIS
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Somewhere in a mysterious and magical place, there lives little singing, lizard-like creatures called the Do-Dum Tribe. Every Do-Dum has the ability to sing, but few special Do-Dums possess the magic of a unique sound. Do-Ti is one of the ordinary Do-Dums, whose desire to possess a unique sound, has led him to venture outside of the Mango Gardens. However, when Do-Ti tries to return, he discovers that the Great Tree, that has always been home to his people, has been taken over by a big black bird! Now Do-Ti and the remaining members of his tribe, must find away to beat this new enemy...

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HoHumDeeDum! - Chapter Fourteen
FUCK YOU!
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Somewhere in a mysterious and magical place, there lives little singing, lizard-like creatures called the Do-Dum Tribe. Every Do-Dum has the ability to sing, but few special Do-Dums possess the magic of a unique sound. Do-Ti is one of the ordinary Do-Dums, whose desire to possess a unique sound, has led him to venture outside of the Mango Gardens. However, when Do-Ti tries to return, he discovers that the Great Tree, that has always been home to his people, has been taken over by a big black bird! Now Do-Ti and the remaining members of his tribe, must find away to beat this new enemy...

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HoHumDeeDum! - Chapter Thirteen
WTF?!?!?!
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Somewhere in a mysterious and magical place, there lives little singing, lizard-like creatures called the Do-Dum Tribe. Every Do-Dum has the ability to sing, but few special Do-Dums possess the magic of a unique sound. Do-Ti is one of the ordinary Do-Dums, whose desire to possess a unique sound, has led him to venture outside of the Mango Gardens. However, when Do-Ti tries to return, he discovers that the Great Tree, that has always been home to his people, has been taken over by a big black bird! Now Do-Ti and the remaining members of his tribe, must find away to beat this new enemy...

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HoHumDeeDum! - Chapter Twelve
Oh?
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Somewhere in a mysterious and magical place, there lives little singing, lizard-like creatures called the Do-Dum Tribe. Every Do-Dum has the ability to sing, but few special Do-Dums possess the magic of a unique sound. Do-Ti is one of the ordinary Do-Dums, whose desire to possess a unique sound, has led him to venture outside of the Mango Gardens. However, when Do-Ti tries to return, he discovers that the Great Tree, that has always been home to his people, has been taken over by a big black bird! Now Do-Ti and the remaining members of his tribe, must find away to beat this new enemy...

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HoHumDeeDum! - Chapter Eleven
Dying
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Somewhere in a mysterious and magical place, there lives little singing, lizard-like creatures called the Do-Dum Tribe. Every Do-Dum has the ability to sing, but few special Do-Dums possess the magic of a unique sound. Do-Ti is one of the ordinary Do-Dums, whose desire to possess a unique sound, has led him to venture outside of the Mango Gardens. However, when Do-Ti tries to return, he discovers that the Great Tree, that has always been home to his people, has been taken over by a big black bird! Now Do-Ti and the remaining members of his tribe, must find away to beat this new enemy...

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HoHumDeeDum! - Chapter Ten
FUCK YOU!
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Somewhere in a mysterious and magical place, there lives little singing, lizard-like creatures called the Do-Dum Tribe. Every Do-Dum has the ability to sing, but few special Do-Dums possess the magic of a unique sound. Do-Ti is one of the ordinary Do-Dums, whose desire to possess a unique sound, has led him to venture outside of the Mango Gardens. However, when Do-Ti tries to return, he discovers that the Great Tree, that has always been home to his people, has been taken over by a big black bird! Now Do-Ti and the remaining members of his tribe, must find away to beat this new enemy...

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HoHumDeeDum! - Chapter Nine
disappointed
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Somewhere in a mysterious and magical place, there lives little singing, lizard-like creatures called the Do-Dum Tribe. Every Do-Dum has the ability to sing, but few special Do-Dums possess the magic of a unique sound. Do-Ti is one of the ordinary Do-Dums, whose desire to possess a unique sound, has led him to venture outside of the Mango Gardens. However, when Do-Ti tries to return, he discovers that the Great Tree, that has always been home to his people, has been taken over by a big black bird! Now Do-Ti and the remaining members of his tribe, must find away to beat this new enemy...

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Zesteria Season Two
Favorite Pairing
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  • All of my commentary for Zesteria season two I've been hording for the last few months. I almost forgot to post any of this.

  • Tales of Zestiria the X S2 Episode 1, Not sure how excited I should be for this. We're getting like 99% more Rose then I can appreciate.

  • We're starting with Leila and some person.

  • And here's that Rose I didn't want.

  • Yes, it is hard to believe.

  • I feel like this scene is just to glorify Rose.

  • Wow Rose is being rude. I can't believe Sorey isn't insulted.

  • She greeted a guy by beating him back.

  • And everyone is happy to see her.

  • Yes, we noticed she was well-liked- unlike Alisha.

  • Trying to resist the urge to skip around in this.

  • Skipped anyway, I got tired of the over-glorification of Rose.

  • Well this episode is pretty much over. Not that we accomplished anything.

  • Besides kill this guy.

  • Tales of Zestiria the X S2 Episode 2, Oh look, more Rose.

  • Surprised nobody ships Rose and Sorey.

  • Oh this guy is giving Rose flowers. I'm surprised nobody ships this guy with Rose.

  • Yeah, the girl you were flirting with killed him.

  • When in doubt, go into the hole to your doom.

  • I can see why people ship Dezel and Rose.

  • Tales of Zestiria the X S2 Episode 3, continuing from last time.

  • They're all trying to stop Dezel.

  • Mikleo awesome as usual.

  • Dezel's story is kind of cute.... except for the fact that it's about Rose.

  • Seems like Edna's rock kick is getting a lot of miles lately.

  • YEAH YOU BITCHES DON'T FORGET ALISHA!

  • wow, Alisha is in some deep shit.

  • Her army is mosty women, I'm surprised there was guys to get injured.

  • Wow, Alisha's battle really sucked.

  • Well, at least, she's still alive.

  • So Alisha's mother is a commoner?

  • This story line is probably going to lead to Maltran's betrayal.

  • WOW, BEST ENDING EVER!

  • Tales of Zestiria the X S2 Episode 4, Sorey outside of Rose's place.

  • Something tells me that Sorey is gunna find out in this episode.

  • Oh fuck, Rose in a bride dress- oh hell no.

  • Oh this was a flashback.

  • So Mikleo is going to follow Rose and Edna is going to tag along. I already don't like this.

  • Dezel caught them and told them everything.

  • Mikleo maybe riding a horse... but technically it's alone.

  • Why are they drawing out this assassination like this. I would have liked it better if he just died in one swoop.

  • If this guy doesn't die ever at all then we're just wasting our time.

  • GOD SOREY GO AWAY!

  • YOU'RE SERIOUSLY ENDING THE EPISODE THERE!

  • Tales of Zestiria the X S2 Episode 5, That guy better be dead.

  • I liked how the preview completely skipped the odd shit with the soldiers.

  • FUCK HE'S STILL NOT DEAD!

  • FUCK, he's kicking her ass.

  • This is so many different kinds of disappointment.

  • What a romantic save on Sorey's part.

  • I find it slightly funny that Sorey had to drag her body across the sand.

  • Dezel is stopping her. AWE. Now that was nice.

  • The seraphs in this story are such accessories it's not even funny

  • Well, that's a haunted forest.

  • I'm really not that bothered by the 2d models.

  • YEAH CHASTEN HER.

  • Was the screaming necessary? It felt akward.

  • Seriously, you call that a first meeting?

  • I feel like nothing of importance got done, just a bunch of backstory for Rose.

  • Tales of Zestiria the X S2 Episode 6, Wow, this is already the middle of the season and I feel like we've gone NOWHERE!

  • Wouldn't it make more sense for them to go to the emperor.

  • Wow MAYVIN KNOWS NIGHTS! LOL!

  • Are you kidding me, this is all because of Velvet?

  • yeah MIKLEO YOU WORRY ABOUT ALISHA!!!

  • Wow, she's got a lot of nerve to ask to be a squire after all that she's done.

  • Damn, Roses ritual was cooler than Alisha's. No fair.

  • ALISHA'S CALLING TO HIM! HOW DID SHE FIGURE OUT TO DO THAT.

  • FUCK YES IT'S ALISHA TIME!

  • Tales of Zestiria the X S2 Episode 7, GIVE ME ALISHA!!!

  • lol She lost service.

  • Alisha's father and unnecessary exposition.

  • I feel like they're trying to say he's gunna die soon.

  • Maltran!

  • I wonder if her girls are gunna die in this arc.

  • Landslide? Must be Edna or something.

  • OMFG SHE'S USING HER SQUIRE POWERS FUCK YES!

  • What? Zavied saved her? OMFG I guess they're going through with making them a thing?

  • Translated her name weirdly.

  • GOD I DON'T CARE IF IT'S ZAVIED OR NOT, I WANT ALISHA TO ARMITIZE SO HARD. C'MON UFOTABLE!

  • Maltran is being executed.

  • Well, if it isn't Satan.

  • Wow, I'm surprised he left without killing her.

  • DAMN this episode is almost over and the main characters take forever to get a scene.

  • FUCK, it's gunna end here, isn't it?

  • Nope, she's infiltrating by water. COOL.

  • Cue the ending theme.

  • Tales of Zestiria the X S2 Episode 8, Back to Alisha attacking!

  • Wow they got caught really fast.

  • He's an Alisha supporter? Seriously?

  • Oh, she's going after her father.

  • No way, Alisha should have been able to fight that guy without a weapon.

  • Oh, they just wanted her father to protect her.

  • WOw, she just bounced back from her father's death really fast.

  • He jumped with no sound effects.

  • Never mind, he's not the problem anymore.

  • Nice BG song. It's in English and I want it.

  • Wow, Alisha arrived really fast.

  • It's so nice to see both girls getting Shepard action.

  • Wow I COMPLETELY FORGOT ABOUT SIMONE!

  • Tales of Zestiria the X S2 Episode 9, LET'S DOOO THIS!

  • Look at all these people praying!

  • YEAH MIKLEO YOU WORRY ABOUT YOUR WAIFU!

  • 9 day time jump.

  • WHY THE HELL ARE THEY IN THE SAME BEDROOM?!?!?!

  • I guess this is supposed to be funny?

  • I'm surprised everything is back to normal for Alisha's side of the story.

  • WOW, I'M SO FRIGGEN OUT ABOUT ALISHA ACTUALLY SITTING AND TALKING TO MIKLEO.

  • Yeah, I was wondering about Dezel but apparently he's busying kicking ass.

  • Wow, she wasted everyone with a vision.

  • BASERIA SPOILERS!!!

  • Rose is suddenly in charge of Sorey's wardrobe.

  • YOU BET YOUR ASS THAT SHE'S FUCKING COMING!!!

  • But it's just as plain as the other outfits1

  • ARMY TRYOUTS YAY!

  • Still ship Edna and Zaveid.

  • What the hell with this random hot springs fan service.

  • Atakk s back?

  • NORMIN ARMY!

  • sERGEI?

  • Well, this is turning into the ending theme from last season.

  • ARMITIZATION1 FUCK YESSS! DO IT DO IT DO IT DO IT DO IT

  • wOW, Like I predicted Lailah offered to armitize with Alisha, but it seems like she's going to be Sorey's staple. That gives me hope!

  • DAMN IT, IT'S GOING TO BE EDNA?! THAT'S THE NUMBER ONE CHARACTER I DIDN'T WANT TO SEE HER ARMITIZE WITH!

  • wOW, no instructional for this. They just jumped to it.

  • Oh, it didn't work. WOW. That's interesting.

  • Tales of Zestiria the X S2 Episode 10, LET'S DOOO THIS!

  • That pile of normin look's like something out of a claw machine.

  • Snow already?

  • None of the seraphs are dressed for this.

  • Simone is still here?

  • I wonder if anybody ships Simone and Dezel.

  • In speaking of ships- I haven't seen ufotable pandering the zaveidxlailah ship since this started.

  • They're still trying to armatize.

  • Since they are more focused on Rose, I guess Alisha may not armatize at the same time as her.

  • WHERE YOU GETTING THE SHIT TO MAKE MOUSSE!!?!

  • Mikleo had a mousse enlightenment.

  • WHAT IS WITH ALL THIS DESSERT STUFF!?!?!

  • wOW Edna sure is sitting super far away from them in this scene.

  • So Simone can't get in contact with her master.

  • Is Dezel going to leave?

  • Melevelance entered the bunks

  • Wow, Mikleo's attack looked more like side scroller animation.

  • Wow, that's a lot of dragons.

  • Wow, this is extreme battle animation for Sorey.

  • Yeah, looks like Roseis going to do the armitization first. Boring...

  • Wow, not very glamorous animation for her either.

  • Alisha is going to try Edna anyway?!?? OMFG

  • OMFG YEEESSSSSSSS! her outfit is different!

  • Lunarre seriously needs a plot.

  • Simone is taking them out now?

  • Mad that the girls armitization didn't get more animation.

  • Wow, that was weird.

  • Well, this episode is just about over.

  • Simone turned into a dragon too.

  • Tales of Zestiria the X S2 Episode 11, Continuing where we last left off, Symone is a dragon now.

  • Surprised that Rose is more hurt than Alisha and it seemed like Alisha was having a harder time learning how to armitize.

  • Dezel wants to barrow Zaveid's gun?

  • If I didn't already know that Dezel and Zaveid knew each other, this confrontation wouldn't seem so weird.

  • Lunarre is dead?

  • They found an old lady normin.

  • More Baseria insert.

  • More get-along fluff.

  • More RosAli that I don't care for.

  • Trying to resist the urge to skip ahead.

  • Rose is telling off Dezel.

  • I suppose Sorey is having a dream.

  • If he meets velvet crow here- OH SHIT THERE'S VELVET CROW RIGHT NOW!

  • Wow, they're seriously burying Lunarre?

  • Epic HERO WALK.

  • Wow the animation is looking good.

  • Well, Everyone turned on Dezel and Zaveid got his gun back.

  • More Rose pandering.

  • Dezel saved Symone.

  • But he died and his last message is in his hat....

  • Oh we get to see his eyes?

  • She looks so strange in his hat.

  • I feel like I would have preferred it if they didn't have everyone standing there like that.

  • Tales of Zestiria the X S2 Episode 12, MAL says this is the final episode. Let's see how it holds up.

  • Continuing from the last episode.

  • SHE SLAPPED HIM?

  • We get an intro anyway? I always wondered if we were ever going to see Sorey with wind kamui in this series or what.

  • Who is this white dragon supposed to be? God this crossover....

  • Some how they made it inside him.

  • OH WOW HE'S HOT! He's also Mikleo's uncle.

  • I wonder if they're gunna explain how Mikleo came to be also... probably not.

  • Wow, the animation quality peaked!

  • OMFG MIKLEO AND ALISHA MIKLEO AND ALISHA MIKLEO AND ALISHA MIKLEO AND ALISHA!!!!!!!

  • And Rose and Edna like how it should be.

  • GOD MIKALI I CAN'T EVEN!!

  • Awe, they came apart.

  • THE POWER OF ONE!

  • She gave him Dezel's hat.

  • So, what is Sorey thinking- like a group armitization or something?

  • The episode is ending. They don't have time. is there going to be a 13th episode.

  • RAINBOW OUTFIT UPGRADE!

  • Yeah there is going to be one more episode.

  • BUT WE FUCKING HAVE TO WAIT A MONTH FOR IT.

  • ...one month later...

  • Tales of Zestiria the X S2 Finale, I literally forgot that it was gunna play on April 29th, it took so damn long.

  • Interesting that he couldn't handle all four of them at the same time.

  • The battle was a mess, but the part where he took the Heldalf to the center of the earth was fucking hilarious

  • How much time passed before Sorey came back? There were people with long hair left and right.

  • I'm like completely confused about how Alisha became queen. I got the impression she had siblings and was the lowest man on the totem pole. I'm not mad though.

  • Rose's outfit looks too modern for the time period.

  • New shepherd is hot, haven't even seen his face yet... or her... that was a lot of hair. WHY DOES LAILAH GET ALL THE HOT SHEPHERDS! AND WHY ARE ALL THE HOT SHEPHERDS NEVER THE MAIN CHARACTER- They're always somebody else unimportant.

  • I like how Edna and Zveid are still together. I ship it.

  • I LOVE how Mikleo is still keeping in touch with Alisha, but for a moment there, I thought they were expositioning that because they weren't gunna show him.

  • Also, too much RosAli pandering. Still don't get why people ship that pairing. Rose still does not appeal to me, even with gobs of long hair.

  • Nice to see Alisha got to wear her DLC outfit.

  • Y'KNOW WHO GOT JIPPED! FUCKIN EIZEN GOT JIPPED HE'S STILL A FUCKING DRAGON. Even after Sorey promised Edna he'd turn him back into a human.

  • Randomly reuniting with Sorey who fucking didn't age- DOESN'T EVEN COMMENT THAT MIKLEO IS FINALLY HIS HEIGHT.

  • Why did they agree to race if they were just gunna armitize? That'll make it a gaurenteed tie.

  • WEIRD WEIRD WEIRD ENDING, but Okay....


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